Now there are differing views to this theory or opinion that Carr has formulated. The book 'Get Smarter' by Jamais Cascio says that the formation of technology and the Internet can only have one effect, and that is to expand our intelligence. On the other hand, Clay Shirky stated that if the Internet is used widely, then the opposers will have a reason to criticize the growth of the Internet because it will obstruct peoples 'intellectual attainment'.
My position on the issue or contorversy is that the Internet is 'godsend' to us (the human race) because it gives the people so much more information in so little time that there is no reason to criticize the Internet at all. It is one of the most technological acheivments we have at ourfinger tips and I feel that we should have every right to use it and protect it
Eric,
ReplyDeleteFirst, I love this sentence, though the book should be changed to the article "Get Smarter": The book 'Get Smarter' by Jamais Cascio says that the formation of technology and the Internet can only have one effect, and that is to expand our intelligence. In the first paragraph, also include the title of Carr's article and complete the quotation, with double quotation marks and with page number.
In the last paragraph, it sounds as if the internet is in control, eerily its own entity. These essays are so much about how we as humans use it and interact with it, so it is important to stay on this topic. Also, as you bringing in your position, connect it to what others are saying. How is this position you have different from the others?
My best,
Cheryl
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